In chapter 3, once peter leaves the town and stays
in the old fortress, I think it gives not only a sense of hopelessness and fear
for the reader, but I think it also creates a feeling of nostalgia that you can
feel through Peter’s character. I think it further accents this feeling by
showing that Peter is homesick, and it shows some of peters character traits,
which I think could be described as Spontaneous and almost… Regretful that he
had to leave in the first place. I also really liked how he was shown to be
quick thinking when he hid in the coffin, which I think will prove to be
important later on.
I like the suspense
that is shown in chapter 4, and the way that you can’t tell what the company of
actors is going to do when they find him. I think the suspense and the way the
author can seem to make the fear seem greater, all by using the coffin to
personify death, and foreshadow that at least one death is most likely to come
in the rest of the story.
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ReplyDeleteI like your writing, and thinking on these two chapters. I think you could improve on the explanations of the chapters a little bit more though. But all in all, it was good. ;D
ReplyDeleteDid He not go to a play. What one did he go to?
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